WALT: Create a piece of writing the creates a picture in the readers mind using descriptive writing.
Sean was the biggest kid on the street well he was until big steve moved in next door…
Sean was ruling the streets like a king he would steal all the money for ice cream in the summer and in the winter all the money for hot cripes his house was the biggest in the street and and he was home schooled so when the bus came to pick up the children who go to school he would pick up the school bus and make all the kid give him there money or they would be late to school.
He was the boss of the street even all the adults got bossed around by him. But when big Steve moved next door things changed.
All of the sudden big Steve was the king of the street and Sean was nothing but the normal sized kids were fed up they were used to one big kid bossing them around and now there were two and there were extremely annoyed with that so they came up with an idea that they would buy a lot of their favourite food which was chips and put sleeping agent in it so they would fall asleep and when they ate the food they fell asleep and then they rolled them out of town and they were saved.
That was until humongous Stephen came to town they were in trouble again what would they do to save themselves again. They knew nothing about him, nothing at all, they had to come up with a new plan but what…
This is my piece of descriptive writing we used story starters written by famous people this piece is called big vs bigger.
here is a link to the website I used
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